this is amazing, i love how you did the moon.
1.the front left forearm, the dew claw is a tad hight, but the rest s fine
2. tail, tails great lenth size etc, but the shape (fluff splits etc) is a bit large and makes the tail look thin
3. the body is great, i know hes standing up more toward the chest, but i wouldrise the back a bit.
4. the back hindquarters, they look great! i love how you drew them, but there just a tad small :3
other than tat this is amazing!!!! just a few little areas that can be fixed :3